The wonderful space of Cox Hall truly beholds the greatest
culinary delight in all of Emory even with all the local restaurants available.
On the other hand, Cox Hall embodies the epiphany of college food as in
distasteful, bland, and unappetizing. In whatever context Cox Hall holds in the
hearts of Emory students, it certainly displays the diversity of people and
beliefs that the campus holds.
September
19, 2016 (10:00 – 10:50 AM)
I interview a student from my English class about her
opinions on Cox Hall. She has been to Cox Hall and usually goes around 2 o’clock
PM as her lunch fits into that time period in the schedule. Also, she prefers
to get the Asian food if available. When asked what could be improved in Cox
Hall, she replied that she would like a soft serve ice cream machine to be
added. While asking my how financially better the Dobbs University Center and
Cox Hall, she mentioned that Cox Hall might be financially better as she gets
to dictate how much she spends on food instead of paying a set amount for
swipes.
September 23, 2016 (5:30 – 6:30 PM)
In the first minutes of walking
into Cox Hall, the students do what is expected in Cox Hall, eat. I notice the
type of people that enter each line. The diversity of people in just the
Mexican-themed food line shutters the usually convention for familiarity. These
certain Asian students ask their nearby peers for what’s the best tacos to get
from the place as they don’t seem to be familiar with Mexican food. Then I
realize that people in the Asian line were learning about bulgogi as someone
asked what the beef option was for their protein. People may learn about these
dishes from just interacting with people and not just eating the food.
After
seeing the main crowd move away after the lunch rush, people still linger on
enjoying a much longer lunch than others. These students either work during
their lunch or just socialize with their friends. Most students took their lunch
as a break while few labored on their computers and notebooks. On a typical day
of relief for many, students still study as the norm at Emory. The diversity Cox
Hall holds tells much about the students as the same place held people studying
and people pre-partying at the same time. The insights through Cox Hall often
hold the most gravity in learning about the community and the people in it.
You have a couple of grammatical errors/typos; however, the content of your observational sections is, overall, solid. If you were to revise this post though, I would ask you to rework the introductory paragraph to be more observation-based (and/or provide evidence for each claim you make) and also less hyperbolic.
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